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No one to talk to,
No one to hear.
No way to speak truth,
Nothing is clear.

Gone is my happiness,
Gone is my smile.
Lost is my laughter,
Been lost for a while.

Emptiness
Inside me.
Loneliness
Beside me.

No longer
Wanting to breathe.
All my friends,
I could decieve.

Why was I
Made this way?
Rain,
Come some other day.

I don't feel anymore.
-Julia Ngo; April 21, 2012
just a lil song i wrote
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decayingcherrytree Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful.
Totally read this as a rap/rapcore sounding song. XD
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xEmoxShitzhux May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thnx
and thats cool i guess lol
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decayingcherrytree May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem
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:iconarmonsterz:
really amazing lyrics your a amazing song writer^^
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xEmoxShitzhux Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank yuu :}
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TheUmbreonDude Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Beautiful!It expresses emotion in a majestic way!!
I'll help you to feel! -spreads arms- Give me hugs! =3
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xEmoxShitzhux Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*hugs bck* and thank yuu.~
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TheUmbreonDude Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
you welcome!~
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dorkishay Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing!
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xEmoxShitzhux Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank yuu.
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